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She says she wants a good guy, someone to treat her right, She meets him, likes him but soon looks for faults, Why is it that she is so broken? Has he broken her into so many pieces, its almost impossible to be with another lad? She asks so many question, yet is just told 'go with the flow', If only they knew it was not that easy, The battle she fights is with her own heart, Trying to move on , But, desires soon fade, passion soon falls, Why is it that all things beautiful soon lose its charm? But, this is neither fatal nor final, Oneday she will find solace within her heart, and allow the past, to pass. BY C.SAUNDERS

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 4/5/2015 10:00:00 PM
Christine, Thank you for the sweet reply to my comment. Have yourself a Happy Easter Love LINDA
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Date: 2/28/2015 7:02:00 PM
We can take it all in Christine, adapt in ways and accept reality. Not blame fault in all we see. Enjoyed your poem very much... LINDA
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Christine Saunders
Date: 3/1/2015 10:31:00 AM
Thanks Linda, always appreciate your comments. Xx

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