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CONSTELLATIONS Haiku and Tanka like an eye into the universe that far spiral galaxy bright northern star seeded by heaven’s angels to announce the night a billion stars and beyond a zillion more and beyond and beyond what an artist god he’s poked gadzillion holes in the evening sky that we may see the light of heaven such a celebration! some giant firework explodes each night and showers sparks through all creation Dave Austin

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Date: 6/10/2016 9:38:00 PM
Beautiful. No one way to view the heavens. Well done! ~Trudy~
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Date: 5/27/2016 8:33:00 PM
Another amazing write by yourself! You've allotted them a meaningful place in this cosmic universe, where the moon thinks it reigns supreme. When astronauts return, they can never mention that they have visited heaven. Bravo to you, Daver! Rapturous hugs (without shedding a feather),Love, Mikki
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Date: 5/26/2016 10:39:00 AM
beautifully scribed with greeat aha end lines, daver... huggs
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Date: 5/26/2016 10:56:00 AM
Thanks for the visit. Love, daver
Date: 5/25/2016 5:07:00 PM
Beautiful. We only have to look up to experience His power. Great job. God Bless, JB Hi Daver, How have you been. I'm finally well and back. JB
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Daver Austin
Date: 5/26/2016 10:21:00 AM
Welcome back and thanks for the visit. Love, daver
Date: 5/25/2016 3:07:00 PM
I found out what I was dong wrong, hence. Love, daver
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Date: 5/25/2016 3:08:00 PM
Ooops! This is for Andrea. daver
Date: 5/24/2016 6:10:00 PM
Wonderful, DAver, simply wonderful.
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Date: 5/24/2016 3:19:00 PM
Dave, I really enjoyed this wonderfully penned collection.
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Daver Austin
Date: 5/25/2016 3:13:00 PM
Thanks for the visit. Enjoyed visiting you too. Love, daver
Date: 5/24/2016 12:58:00 PM
Poking holes so we can see heaven...delightful, Daver!
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Daver Austin
Date: 5/25/2016 3:26:00 PM
Good to hear from you, Kim. Let's see what you've written. Love, daver

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