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Constantly Been Criticized

Constantly Been Criticized Have you ever constantly been criticized? And before you knew it then realized If people with me truly sympathized, Poems would not appear to be disguised. I am sure everyone has a certain talent And all of our efforts are very valiant; Not only that, you can be self-reliant When with God's commands are compliant. Was complimented saying I am gifted Now both my soul and spirit are uplifted Found out after poems through I had sifted Ones lacking love will make people livid. Our house was decorated with much care There are Christmas things everywhere Left items in box which we wanted to spare Compared to rest found them to be fair. Current house we live in now do favor Which is similar to our next door neighbor Who with on occasion we may rattle a sabre But usually are always on our best behavior. Special is God's each silent and quiet night And in foreign lands there are those that fight While we are here with Him and all His might In America that sure is such a glorious sight. Amen James Serious Mysterious Horn Retired Veteran

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Date: 12/9/2014 9:53:00 AM
Very good write --a soul lifter Sir. Thanks for the poem. Regards >>>rajat
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