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Constance

C ome,colour my canvas mind again with your white ink, O pen up those horizons for another flight~~ N ostalgic,melancholic and sublime, S ing again those pleasant serenades T ranquilizing my mind with soft words, A nd let me see the world through those eyes N esting a bird called sorrow, C arelessly leaving its impression in my mind E verlasting and almost eternal. =============000============== By:kashinath karmakar (10th January, 2012)

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Date: 2/7/2012 7:05:00 AM
Congratulations to you on your win in Cyndi 's "Missing Souper, We Love You" contest Kash. I wish you many more wins in your writing career. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/5/2012 8:34:00 AM
I feel the very same way, Kash...Can't wait til she revisits the poetry scene. Congrats to you, dear friend. Gwenodlen
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Date: 2/5/2012 7:34:00 AM
congrats Kash on a wonderful first place win for these loving words about our friend Constance.. please know she is dealing with some personal issues right now and taking a break from poetry but she thinks of us all every day.. y friend..luv..
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Date: 2/4/2012 7:47:00 PM
A fitting tribute for a beloved poet. congratulations Kash. Love, Joyce
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Date: 1/14/2012 8:36:00 PM
Any woman named Constance will like this fine acrostic. Good work, Kash.
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Date: 1/13/2012 9:45:00 AM
Nesting a bird called sorrow, excellent, Kash! Just excellent :)
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Date: 1/12/2012 12:27:00 PM
My mother's name was Constance also...I feel as tho u painted out Sweetheart so beautifully. Superb stuff, Kash!! Gwendolen
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Date: 1/11/2012 11:56:00 PM
I diGG this form and your poem Ka$h, JoeY
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Date: 1/11/2012 6:33:00 PM
hey, there, Kash, I am hoping to finish here soon. Got a lot done HERE but still much to do in my house!! please let me know if your son ever posts anything. LUv, Andrea
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Date: 1/11/2012 3:49:00 PM
awesome acrostic, wonderful words so positive. harry
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Date: 1/11/2012 3:22:00 PM
A lovely tribute to a lovely lady, Kash.
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Date: 1/11/2012 9:50:00 AM
yes Kash I wrote about her too.. she is missed and she is so loved.. good luck in contest.. sshhh.. she is doing fine but we must believe she will return to PS one day luv..
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Date: 1/11/2012 6:28:00 AM
Wonderful name and frame of words that describe a lovely soul, Brenda
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Date: 1/10/2012 10:25:00 PM
She is a divine poetess and I sure hope she sees this,Kash. Does she still have an account here, do you think? Wish I could think who to do my poem for. I want it to be someone that nobody else has chosen!! soupmail.
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Date: 1/10/2012 8:33:00 PM
a beautiful tribute for constance you penned here kash. love it!
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Date: 1/10/2012 8:19:00 PM
this is such a heartfelt tribute to one souper, constance, who moved us so.. beautiful, kashi!... you awe me.. she is truly missed!..:).. btw, is that the pic of your son?? .. huggs!
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Date: 1/10/2012 2:37:00 PM
Great honor to our friend and poet, Constance...Enjoyed reading this one today..Thanks for stopping by..Sara
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Date: 1/10/2012 1:07:00 PM
Very nice, Kash. A wonderful tribute to Constance. Love, Kim
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Date: 1/10/2012 12:48:00 PM
A true reflection of her work Kash, a lovely dedication to Constance ;) Wilma
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Date: 1/10/2012 12:35:00 PM
I enjoyed reading your poetry this afternoon Kash. I hope to be able to read a lot more of your writing in this new year of 2012. Love, Carol
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Date: 1/10/2012 11:00:00 AM
ÅÅÅÅÅÅÅÅÅÅÅÅÅ cuuuuuuuuut baby,dont cry!!!!!ps.I like the poem to :)OXOX love Anne-Lise
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Date: 1/10/2012 10:14:00 AM
Constance, come back~~
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