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Consolation

Consolation He sits upon your window ledge his tail a darkish feathered wedge. His wings are folded in a prayer. He sits and sees you in your chair alone and sad and in despair. Soon he ventures closer, till his beak's against the window sill. It seems he feels you praying, so he bows his head. It seems as though this tiny bird can feel your sorrow. But that's not why he's here today; he's come to take your sad away so you don't have to feel so blue. His notes are bright, his tune is true. With this great gift he comforts you.

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Date: 5/6/2024 8:36:00 AM
Hi Carol. I am a bit of an anachronism. Some narratives don't work in formalist style. I have written a half dozen free verse, blank verse, and even a couple of haiku. I always end up trying to make it rhyme. Robert
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Date: 5/6/2024 12:25:00 AM
This is such a lovely poem, Carol. it reminds me of a little Robbin that used to come to my garden table every day. I felt blessed.Thank you this. Zyrool. Have a wonderful week ahead.
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Carol Louise Moon
Date: 5/6/2024 5:03:00 AM
I'm glad it touched your heart, Zyrool. Carol Louise
Date: 5/5/2024 6:25:00 PM
This is the first poem of yours I have read. I am taken with the narrative. I am a traditionalist and I believe poetry should rhyme and tell a story and/or exude emotion. This does both. Very Well Done. I especially like your use of enjambment. Z
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Carol Louise Moon
Date: 5/5/2024 11:24:00 PM
Robert, thank you for visiting my site and appreciating this poem. I have more in the traditional format. I believe that not all poems need to rhyme. I also make use of repetends, repeating lines. Many formal poems use these, as well. Carol Louise
Date: 5/5/2024 11:20:00 AM
I liked it! Manty times animals can sense our sadness or when we are in danger. I could see the imagery!
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Carol Louise Moon
Date: 5/5/2024 11:20:00 PM
Thank you, Lynn. I'm so glad you appreciate my poem. Carol Louise
Date: 1/14/2022 4:25:00 PM
I found this poem comforting Carol, and I need comfort, have had my husband in hospital for nine weeks and can’t wait to have him back home. Also I love robins. A belated welcome to PoetrySoup… Belle
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Carol Louise Moon
Date: 1/19/2022 9:16:00 AM
God bless you and your husband, Belle. The best to you always.
Date: 6/30/2021 8:21:00 PM
Taking in your first here on soup, Carol. So pleased to do so, the poetry, superb.
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Carol Louise Moon
Date: 7/1/2021 4:10:00 PM
Thank you so much, Harry. I always value your comments. Carol Louise
Date: 2/17/2021 1:04:00 AM
I picture this bird so vividly, it reminds me of the robin which always makes me smile, a lovely poem Carol, I'm adding it to my faves:-) hugs Jan xx
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Carol Louise Moon
Date: 2/17/2021 12:32:00 PM
Thank you so much, Jan. I'm so glad you like it. :)
Date: 10/2/2020 10:56:00 PM
This is a sweet, touching poem. I can just picture this little bird coming to cheer me up. I can't help but love the little creature.
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Date: 9/25/2020 11:57:00 AM
A great gift, indeed! Carol, I am deeply moved by the beauty of both the deep message and the amazing artistry with you you've expressed your profound poetry. Poignant, spiritual, inspiring! Great use of enjambment, rhythm, rhymes and imagery. I'm so glad you've joined PoetrySoup! Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Carol Louise Moon
Date: 9/25/2020 8:10:00 PM
Thank you so much, Susan for the encouragement.
Date: 9/25/2020 10:52:00 AM
This made me cry. its lovely. thank you for sharing this poem and sharing in mine
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Carol Louise Moon
Date: 9/25/2020 11:23:00 AM
Yep, sharing soul-to-soul is what it's all about! Welcome to Poetrysoup, dear poet.
Date: 9/16/2020 5:49:00 AM
I do love birds Carol. I've spent many a comforting moment with them. You've captured that lovely feeling with your words. Linda
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Carol Louise Moon
Date: 9/16/2020 7:06:00 AM
Thank you so much for your encouragement, Linda.
Date: 8/21/2020 8:12:00 PM
this is another good write Carol,very heartfelt and real,I like your style in writing
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