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Consequence

i tore myself apart first my skin was peeled with my thoughts then my flesh ripped apart with my anger and each word that you had spoke latched at me like the pain i deserve never thought it would come to this nor did i want this to happen but for each action a consequence stands behind it

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 12/29/2008 12:48:00 AM
Thank you very much =].
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Date: 12/25/2008 7:22:00 PM
Visceral... so strongly expressed. The absence of punctuation is very effective, dragging the reader through to the bitter conclusion. Excellent! Best wishes, Keith
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Book: Shattered Sighs