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Consciousness Correction

Placed seventh in Consciousness Correction Poetry Contest Sponsored by Unseeking Seeker Consciousness Correction                                     A concerted view of oneself                                     Treating oneself as superior,                                       Judging others as inferior                                  Creates for oneself a deep gulf.                                Pride, disease that grips many men                                  Extends apace far wide and tall,                                   Distances relatives and friends                                And was the cause of Satan`s fall.                                  Excess of pride over time leads                                       To the loss of humility                               And certainly does show the seeds                                    That head to sinful vanity.       It chews the the roots of compassion, Becomes a poison for the soul Spurs the germs of delusion And in time leads to one`s downfall. It breeds the germ of rash anger That gnaws the body and the mind And does give rise to the danger Of gushing ills of every kind. Anger disrupts family life, Spurs wilful wants of tolerance And where frequent disputes are rife Prompts grim domestic violence. Some argue that a pinch of pride Is the root of success in life, Propels man to meet every tide And to overcome every strife. Some claim that bursts of light anger Forge ahead in life work progress, Often break hurdles asunder And induce personal success. Such success is but material, Is deceptive and illusive; Attaining success that`s real Needs correcting one`s perspective. It needs setting the mind to rest, Raising one`s mindful consciousness, Slowly lifting one`s awareness Of the inner self at its best. Consciousness of the inner self, Indeed, spears away all one`s pride, Dispels harsh anger from oneself, Sets ills of vanity aside; It leads to mind`s tranquility, Frees us from wild worries of life, Ushers in true humility And unchains us from daily strife. It is key to securing peace, The gate to real happiness, The fountain of eternal bliss And the true source of joyousness. Real peace and happiness dwell Not in social rank, not in wealth, Not in pride, not in angry cells But deep within one`s inner self, In submitting to the Divine, In chanting sacred hymns.

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Date: 12/4/2023 12:02:00 PM
Congratulations on your win! There is much wisdom to be pondered here in your words. Gratitude for this write and blessings.
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Krishnanand Guptar
Date: 12/6/2023 10:58:00 PM
Thanks brother Sam for visiting and appreciating my poem. Your comments really touch my heart. May the grace of the Lord rest with you and those near and dear to you. Regards Krishnanand
Date: 11/30/2023 6:19:00 AM
Back with hearty congratulations on your win.
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Krishnanand Guptar
Date: 11/30/2023 7:10:00 AM
Thanks a lot Master Sotto for again visiting the poem and extending your hearty wishes. I really appreciate them. Wish you a pleasant thoughtful evening. KG
Date: 11/30/2023 5:53:00 AM
Masterfully expressed. Congratulations on your placement.
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Krishnanand Guptar
Date: 12/6/2023 11:05:00 PM
Thanks brother Richard for visiting and appreciating my poem. Your comments really touch my heart. May the grace of the Lord rest with you and those near and dear to you. Regrets for responding to you belatedly as I have been visiting my emails rather infrequently due to my illness. I am still on a recovery phase after a recent coronary surgery. Regards. Krishnanand
Date: 11/23/2023 6:48:00 PM
Your magnificent epic poem is a great tapestry of profound feelings. I really feel your clever use of multiple aspects will win the competition.
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Krishnanand Guptar
Date: 11/23/2023 8:22:00 PM
Thank you Master Sotto for appreciating the poem and your very positive comments. Wish you a good day and weekend coming ahead.
Date: 11/23/2023 10:58:00 AM
so many true words in your epic poem which you have expressed with great flow.. I think you got all the aspects in this poem.. Will do very well in the contest I believe..
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Krishnanand Guptar
Date: 11/23/2023 8:29:00 PM
Your comments really touch my heart. Thanks a lot for appreciating the poem. Have a nice day and weekend in the perspective. KG

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