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Confusion In the Dark

Sight disappears, irrelevant as dust determination makes one crazy or brave snatching the light anyhow, is a must sensing danger even if it is a wave compensates for survival which is just but not independent from an unknown grave restlessness available for a kind lust as understanding extends its hands to save view the chronicles of a struggling boy thinking hammer is needed to break small nut nothing then is as temporal as joy each promise comes with a coma and a but a sorry mind turned into a bad toy strings of slavery only clarity can cut

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Date: 3/21/2016 3:04:00 PM
You are trying to cover a lot of psycological ground here ;). Sending soup mail. Light & Love
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Debbie Guzzi
Date: 4/20/2016 4:51:00 PM
welcome always my friend
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Funom Makama
Date: 4/20/2016 1:22:00 PM
Thank you so much Debbie
Date: 3/4/2016 2:20:00 AM
Those last three lines are particularly unique and powerful...very interesting sonnet here, Funom - I would love to hear about what inspired you to write this and your interpretation of it! ~Laura
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Funom Makama
Date: 3/5/2016 10:49:00 AM
When a difficult situation makes one confused, the person becomes totally lost. Trying to find solutions and answers on ones own can prove very difficult and even when so many attempts bring the person in question to an answer, it ends up been "nearly"
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Funom Makama
Date: 3/5/2016 10:49:00 AM
A CONTINUATION FROM THE REPLY BELOW......... The mind gets frustrated as it is being played by confusion of which the last line ends by telling: Only clarity (explanation by another helping hand) can bring the saving grace. No inspiration from this one, just my imagination. Thank you so much for your wonderful comment

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