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CONFUSION

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CONFUSION

A mirage of thoughts
Swirling in my brain.
Lies.  Deceit.  Truths untold.
	Doubts.  Hopes.
		Dreams.  Fear!
			Hate.  Love.
				War.  Peace.
Ideas wanting to come out,
But finding no way of passage.

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  1. Date: 4/20/2010 12:15:00 AM
    Not bad. Again, very Japanese. I think that is where you shine, with such sharp, concise imagery.