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'confused Space'

I think I’ve faltered again I crossed that line The one I promised Never to cross again Under my skin, You seem to be again How did you get there? Do you even know? That you are there again? Maybe you are not even aware That you faltered again - You got me, in that confused space Where I know what I feel, But I am so not sure if I want to feel it again *tongue in the cheek write on love* ©120820121545

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Joe Maverick

Date: 6/5/2013 4:53:00 PM

Hey Wilma great tale in this emotion filled write Thesef scenes are exeptiinal; in their sharpness, giving closeness of feeling to the reader.. Well done here.'

Debra Squyres

Date: 9/4/2012 10:06:00 AM

Not a comfortable space !! But, when is love always comfortable !! I do like this poem!!

Delysia Hendricks

Date: 8/20/2012 4:13:00 PM

Promises to self are easiest broken. I know all too well the space you so eloquently describe. Good writing, my friend. :)

John Loving Iii

Date: 8/16/2012 3:00:00 PM

break up get back together break up get back together ect. ect. i hate that.

Jack Horne

Date: 8/13/2012 1:53:00 PM

yes, it can be a daunting feeling, my friend -well expressed and well written, as ever. Have a great day lfde

Nette Onclaud

Date: 8/13/2012 12:16:00 PM

love way to long for answers to love's quizzes, wilms.. this radiant style becomes you... so lovely!..:) huggs!

Nette Onclaud
Date: 8/16/2012 12:01:00 PM

*lovely* way

Daver Austin

Date: 8/13/2012 9:09:00 AM

Hey! You be vulnerable - a bad way to be. Stay cool, Wilma. Great write. LOve, daver

Harry Horsman

Date: 8/13/2012 4:21:00 AM

Hey Wilma, i love this, yet it is sprinkled with sadness,

Chris Lane

Date: 8/12/2012 5:16:00 PM

That "space" is very tricky.Lol Nice poem Wilma. You are very gifted and talented for sure. I love reading your poems. Take care Chris

Willie Wright

Date: 8/12/2012 3:42:00 PM

I like it.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/12/2012 10:48:00 AM

This is really good writing, WIlma. You are a wonder when it comes to philosophy on love!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 8/12/2012 10:39:00 AM

If you not are sure....let him wait. - Like this one Wilma, very good!!! - Thank you for visit and comments my poem. - Always a pleasure.../always welcome ! :) - Have a lovely Sunday. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

David Williams

Date: 8/12/2012 8:23:00 AM

Wilma I thought by the title you were writing about the inside of my head, I like it, tongue in cheek or not...David

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 8/12/2012 8:05:00 AM

Perfect, perfect.... The inner soul of a deep poet exposed and naked in words.. An inspirational Lady... Im happy I can call a real friend... hugs and luv and few kisses in the dark lol... Me being me...MJF

Michael J. Falotico
Date: 8/12/2012 8:19:00 AM

Just trying to come out of my shell lol