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it is complete -- protestations of the existentialists notwithstanding -- the end of history. Science is here. slammed over me. and everywhere the necessity of Standardization. in my labor and in my thought Capitalism dictates. efficiency is the new God, except for the God-people themselves of course who experience choice and embrace the Absurd as i spectate. now, hidden by a lifetime of fantasy or tortured by enlightenment either way, bound by survival to succumb: i release my mind to the Average. where is Meaning?

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Date: 5/6/2014 7:13:00 PM
Hi Sam, This poem made me stop and time went by but did I care? No:~) This was magnificent Sam. Thanks for sharing this great poem with us here. Peace, Deborah
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Date: 4/19/2014 6:03:00 PM
Much to ponder, I think many have replaced God with science and are left wondering how did this world become so screwed up.
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Sam Toil
Date: 4/19/2014 9:08:00 PM
Richard, there is wisdom in your words. I have a poem, "A Time Between Gods", which I have not yet posted, but which you might find stimulating. When I do post it, I would so love to get your thoughts. Peace...Sam
Date: 4/18/2014 2:08:00 PM
Welcome to poetry soup!! I hope you love it here. I have always had issues conforming to the world around me. I believe in being yourself no matter who that may be. I agree with the idea that if you change yourself to follow the rules of society you loose the meaning of life and fall into endless averageness. Amazing poem!! Great write!! ~ Heather
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Sam Toil
Date: 4/18/2014 2:29:00 PM
Heather, thanks so much for your warm welcome to PoetrySoup. And for your gracious comment. I agree with you -- about "being yourself no matter who that may be". But it does take energy, don't you think? Constantly fighting back against the forces driving us to "averageness". It can be exhausting. But fight on we must! Peace...Sam
Date: 4/17/2014 3:08:00 PM
There is meaning to life and each person is special with a special purpose..I enjoyed reading your very expressive and creative work..Thanks for the visit to my page..Soup Mail soon..Sara
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