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Written for the contest sponsored by Sotto Poet

im really grateful for all your kindness and support dear soupers, ill try today to respond to all your comments, apologies for my absence.

 

 

 

“Forget the injuries, never forget kindness” ~ Confucious To the faceless names I’ve phased, forgive the silent sunsets, frozen in time, and remember thin cinnamon skylines, how ink carved compassion, cosmically~ when heaven rained bloodstained rhinestones.. I refuse to remember vindictive visions of virtual vultures~ slithering behind silvery screens, awaiting vigorous vaults to electrify frail fingers, browsing through trending triolets tangled~ in a gossamer film of sunlit sentiments, too fluorescent for the ice-mint eyes, refusing to retweet humane hashtags.. I choose to rise beyond malignant memes, that wrestled aggressively; poisoned platform hanging heavy with viral lies in the midst of an alarming algorithm. For forgiveness isn’t an aesthetic noun to be phrased between fervent fogs drifting across misty midnight oblivion. It is a selfless souvenir we bestow upon infernal estuaries, mirroring the maleficent heart of the crimson crescent, seeing beyond evil that ebbs and flows, grasping topaz textures~ rippling in iridescent light. It is in cacophonous silence, we wipe away dust that dwells in hues of infinite darkness, as cold is the sky carrying clouds engrossed in thrashing crescendo, and as the evening jewels ascend to unravel hurt of history, I search for effervescent glows, delicately shielding restless storms within my floral ink; mercilessly drenched in alluring aroma of withered willows~ where promises did fade like moving moonscapes, above ripples of romantic ruins. But like butterflies that cocoon with black-widows, lost in a maze of lethal love, phasing fickle flowers~ I find the fluttering warmth of wildflower kindness, sprouting hues of gratitude amidst an amethyst ambience, reflecting runes swaying within redolent reveries of russet rhymes. Yet, I ponder, in my absence will you draw dynamic stars swirling like dandelion dreams? Would rustic strings of my bronze harp still harmonize soothing serenades, when solitude is your only tune? I hope like astral roses that bloom eternally, I’ll always be remembered for the soft colors of my poetic petals, and these thistles and thorns, but a mere metaphor, of memories forgotten..

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Date: 5/2/2024 6:26:00 PM
IE, I think it is clear you are a very kind person. The interplay of words represents for me the neural pathways of the brain. The images are so complex that they are flashing a lot of information. The message that we can focus on the good memories is a helpful one. Since we're here only at times, we know you will be back at some point. But even if you're unable to answer any of my comments, I hope you are well and in good spirits. It's never easy to balance and juggle all we have to do.
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Date: 4/26/2024 5:40:00 PM
Beautiful- I have been finding lately that the most painful thing is not pain itself or hurt memories but what you say "for forgiveness isn’t an aesthetic noun"... I will fav this
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Date: 4/23/2024 9:29:00 AM
I like how your poem is a poignant reflection on the nuances of forgiveness and the enduring impact of our digital interactions. The imagery is vivid and evocative, painting a picture of a world where virtual connections and real emotions intertwine in unexpected ways...The poem's exploration of forgiveness as a "selfless souvenir" bestowed upon "infernal estuaries" is particularly striking, highlighting the transformative power of letting go of resentment and embracing empathy.
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Date: 4/23/2024 5:25:00 AM
a brilliantly written and remarkable poem, dear Ink. I loved your alliterative lines; they were compelling and a pleasure to read. I appreciated the strength in these words: I choose to rise beyond malignant memes, that wrestled aggressively; The ending lines grabbed my heart and soul. Most certainly, you'll always be remembered for the soft colors of my poetic petals...I hope you know that. Have a lovely day, hugs, Sara
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Date: 4/23/2024 5:11:00 AM
A potent dialogue of emotions, my friend. Feelings woven in splendor of your vocabulary reverberate throughout out, Ink, delivering brilliantly on your theme. ---For forgiveness isn’t an aesthetic noun to be phrased between fervent fogs drifting across misty midnight oblivion. It is a selfless souvenir we bestow upon infernal estuaries---Would rustic strings of my bronze harp still harmonize soothing serenades, when solitude is your only tune? --- superb! A FAVE!!
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Date: 4/23/2024 4:53:00 AM
This poem, among all your others, is truly outstanding. I loved every bit of it, but I especially thought the ending was a brilliant conclusion. Let the memory of you live on in the hearts of those who know you like an eternal bloom of astral roses with their soft, poetic petals. Though memories may fade like thistles and thorns, let them serve as a powerful reminder of your beauty and significance of you. May your legacy inspire others to lead a life filled with love and kindness, and may you continue to be a guiding light for generations to come. Love and Hugs dearest Inky. Xx
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Date: 4/23/2024 3:37:00 AM
forgive the silent sunsets, frozen in time, and remember thin cinnamon skylines, how ink carved compassion, cosmically when heaven rained bloodstained rhinestones.. mmm these lines I cnt stop looking at the imagery! vindictive visions of virtual vultures!through trending triolets tangled! Amazing alliterations aee papi!!reflecting runes swaying within redolent reveries of russet rhymes.omg my heart!! I could eat u up!! mere metaphor, of memories forgotten. The way u bring elegance to this is gorgeous
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Date: 4/23/2024 1:55:00 AM
I was not going to repeat how great are your alliterations, but reading this line: vindictive visions of virtual vultures - how can I not mention it? Such brilliance and poetic write. No doubt your poetry will not be forgotten. You are indeed an astral rose.
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Date: 4/22/2024 11:25:00 PM
Soft colours of my poetic petals… truly a remarkable one
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