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Confined By Rhyme

My life has been confined by rhyme Not in my prime as each limb I climb On rhyme I fixate all of the time A penny a word, maybe a dime When the word won’t come, I pantomime *Written April 11, 2014

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Date: 4/19/2014 11:26:00 AM
I agree to Carrie that is double meaning.. Love it!! Splendid write carolyn dear.. :) CONGRATULATIONS and thanks :) olive_eloisa :)
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Date: 4/19/2014 9:25:00 AM
Oh wow........I would have placed this one higher........it has more than one meaning, I think I am reading between lines. Well done, Carolyn. I hope you are doing better day by day!
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Carolyn Devonshire
Date: 4/19/2014 12:23:00 PM
Yes, Carrie, the double meaning was intentional. Thanks for picking up on it! Have a blessed Easter. Love, Carolyn
Date: 4/19/2014 1:43:00 AM
Carolyn a beautiful rhyming poem,,,great win,,Congrats !
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Date: 4/18/2014 7:46:00 PM
Nice win Carolyn... Congratulations... Verlena
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Date: 4/18/2014 6:01:00 PM
Just stopping by again to offer my congratulations on your fine win Carolyn...Have a happy Easter !!
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Date: 4/18/2014 3:47:00 PM
This is a jolly good rhyme Carolyn. Congrats on a fine win. // paul
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Date: 4/13/2014 7:08:00 PM
Flowing and oh so beautiful!!
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Date: 4/12/2014 4:14:00 PM
lovely to enjoy your wit here again, love x
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Date: 4/12/2014 6:09:00 AM
- This gave me a smile Carolyn :) - Pleased to read :)) - Have a nice weekend! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/12/2014 6:10:00 AM
(A YELLOW smile :)))
Date: 4/11/2014 8:13:00 PM
this is REALLY cute. and I loved that last line!
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Date: 4/11/2014 7:06:00 PM
Very nice rhyming Carolyn. I constantly rhyme myself. My kids think I'm crazy because I always make up songs using rhymes.....Hugs Tim
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Date: 4/11/2014 6:58:00 PM
I like this.. Kind of reminds me of when im walking along thinking to myself about ideas for poetry. I never seem to be able to remember the good ones though my memory isn't very sharp. This is a great write i loved it
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