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Confidence

The sun-speckled public pool overflows with expectant faces; Their glistening eyes look up at me with promises of safety. Unlocking the tension in my knees is one face in particular.

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Fj Thomas

Date: 9/23/2022 10:17:00 PM

'one face in particular'... hmmm... a loved one? A child maybe? The innocence of a stranger? If the one face brought focus I guess it doesn't matter does it :) I hope you are doing well Timothy. I do not write much since I returned, just wanted to reach into the past here a little. Take care

Karen Anglesey

Date: 7/21/2013 4:09:00 PM

Timothy, your poetry is so very enjoyable. Very lovely feel to this one. Congrats on being featured poem of the week :)

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/21/2013 9:10:00 AM

Timothy, Congratulations on your featured poem of the week. enjoy life with smiles :-) love <3 LINDA

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/21/2013 10:29:00 PM

Thought I'd go find a much earlier poem of yours. But I scrolled down and saw I'd seen this one before too. Let me keep searching!!

Timothy Hicks
Date: 5/21/2013 11:08:00 PM

Funny how easy it is to forget which ones you've read... I know I've already read so many that it's kind of a blur if I think about it too much... I appreciate you going back into my older work... means a lot!

Audrey Haick

Date: 4/11/2013 3:15:00 PM

Isn't is just precious when in a sea of faces you can connect to one in particular, like beautiful music! Love this one too. Enjoy your weekend, TIm. Always, Annalise

Timothy Hicks
Date: 4/12/2013 3:24:00 AM

Yes, I was always the scaredy-cat up on the high dive! Love reading your comments!

Laura Breidenthal

Date: 3/18/2013 1:47:00 PM

One in a crowd can make a difference--focusing on that one you can gain so much more than the lot. I got that out of this poem. Anyway, wow, you are a very talented writer. I can't wait to read more from you! keep up the spectacular work, and thank you for your kind review on my poetry. It is very much appreciated. Always, Laura

Timothy Hicks
Date: 3/18/2013 8:50:00 PM

You're a very insightful commentor! Love reading what you have to say... it brings a big smile on my face :)

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/13/2013 5:18:00 PM

cute one, confidence brings the best of luck, enjoyed your write... XOXO P.D.

Timothy Hicks
Date: 3/13/2013 10:07:00 PM

Thanks PD!

Raul Moreno

Date: 3/9/2013 9:26:00 PM

Very descriptive writing, "The sun-speckled public pool" is a nice description.

Timothy Hicks
Date: 3/10/2013 3:47:00 AM

Feel free to send me messages (or I guess it's called Soup Mail) anytime! Thanks for reading :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/9/2013 6:39:00 PM

this one makes me curious to know whose one face in particular you were seeing!! I enjoyed this and a big welcome to soup. So nice to see a writer who really seems to care about his writing. I love that you punctuate and you seem like someone who cares about actually crafting a poem and not just writing words. thanks for reading several of my poems. Andrea

Timothy Hicks
Date: 3/9/2013 6:46:00 PM

I enjoyed the ones I have read so far from you! I'm not always the best at punctuation but I try my best... lol. Being somewhat of a hermit poetry is a great outlet for me to express myself... I am thankful for your appreciation!

John Posey

Date: 3/9/2013 8:07:00 AM

I like your style and will read more if posted..... Jake

Timothy Hicks
Date: 3/9/2013 9:59:00 AM

Thanks for your continued support! Highly appreciated!