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Confetti Dreams

Confetti dreams floating away An innocence again is crushed Under the weight of the fall Countdowns to unconsciousness Filled in flutes of sorrow As the masses mimic cheer Confessions secretly stored Under wraps of indesgression Carried out the door Self inflicted suffrage Abandons another war Anxious the path's unearthed Repentant intemperance subverts

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/1/2017 4:32:00 PM

It is pretty but sad, Tim. I really like it. I hope you have a good new year.

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 1/1/2017 11:08:00 AM

Now that we are into the new year, I hope it brings you cheer. We can't always declare happiness as this poem expresses deep reflection. Blessings to you and yours this new year! : ) 7

Lim'Rik Flats

Date: 1/1/2017 8:24:00 AM

Hoppy NY amigo!

Charlie Smith

Date: 12/31/2016 8:03:00 AM

Never give in my friend, I know you won't...

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 12/31/2016 6:38:00 AM

So much sorrow expressed in this sentimental poem.I hope its fictional Tim .I really wish you and your family a very Happy New Year filled with Health and Peace.

Len Gasun

Date: 12/30/2016 11:59:00 PM

Very beautiful poem expressing sadness my dear friend, Tim. Hope you're well my dear friend. Sorry for coming only now coz I was SOS to my brother for two days on his job; yet under severe cough and cold. Thanks a lot for coming by on my poem. Wishing you the best always! Happy New Year to you and your family!