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Confessions of An Alcoholic

It's a plum, saturated red Swirling in my glass for me This cabernet with a nose on it Flows with a rich viscosity Or a tangy, soury lemon Crisp, bitter and icy cold This martini sitting next to me As I write of stories never told Usually I am impartial to A tomato juice, olive and some lime Stirring any ingredients From the fridge that I can find Yet, these are the glorious These are devils I cannot stray When I sit back, fix my glass And greet the end of day These are confessions Of an alcoholic as I drink I fill, I refill, countless times So much I cannot think I do not foresee my stopping This madness will ensue Until all that I have worked for Is gone in what I say and what I do

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Date: 12/18/2014 2:22:00 AM
Excellent poem. You have turned to face your Demons; and that takes courage! Now summon the strength to confront them. Remember: we all lose in the end - its how you lose that is important! The very best of luck! :) john.
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Lauren Smith
Date: 12/18/2014 4:34:00 PM
I guess you're right... lol! Thanks John
Date: 12/17/2014 8:20:00 PM
I am on the board of Recovery Resources which deal with addition -- I am written on this topic . . . it's a tough topic this is easily misunderstood. Your poem hit the issue dead on --
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Lauren Smith
Date: 12/18/2014 4:35:00 PM
THank you David
Date: 12/17/2014 6:41:00 PM
very well penned - I have a friend who is an alcoholic it is ruining her life and her marriage - makes me so so sad - excellent write:-) Hugs jan xx
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Lauren Smith
Date: 12/18/2014 4:33:00 PM
Thank you Jan!

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