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Conditions of Confusion

Conditions of Confusion I close my eyes and listen, I wait and try to hear, yet still no sound approaches, the same as every year- another circle finished, retracing steps go past, again the picture's shattered, in broken shards of glass- A lonely howl of anguish, a cry of laughter soft, the fallen dew a silver drop, upon the forest moss- but where is it still hiding, that sweet, elusive sound, the music and the symphony, that clear and crystal sound- waves of power crest, then sink into despair, in heavy burdened flying, still laden, without share- to soar and ne'er be conquered, or drown, yet still alive, and whispers on the fleeting breeze, of darkened skies and shallow seas. ~Meredith Ann

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Date: 4/20/2013 2:58:00 AM
Rhythmic font check and followed Nice
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Date: 4/19/2013 10:21:00 PM
Meredith, "Welcome to the poetry soup. My name is Linda; many poets on the soup call me PD for fun. I'm stopping by to invite you on over to my latest contest --called the “7 wonders” I'm hoping you will consider the enjoyment and challenges we offer in our contest. If you like, please consider my contest. You can find the contest page on the top left hand side. I’m looking forward in reading and enjoying your poems in the future. Today I will start by reading all you have posted this far..... Thanks @-> LINDA <-@"
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Date: 4/18/2013 2:49:00 PM
~Meredith Ann :-), Wishing you a nice warm welcome to the Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best in your writings. I hope you find this community to be one of the best. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets, and myself? If you ever want or need feedback on any given poem, please feel free and look me up by clicking on my name anytime you see it.. Luv~*~SKAT"
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