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Condemned To Limbo

Winter approached in hours of finality, quelled midst midnight's imperfectly lit enticement of darkly notable impressive spirits, motioning a welcomed goodbye gesture, laying to rest a chilled salutation, as ghostly ambitions commenced to play a well articulated empowering seduction, chasing lullaby's softly dreamt enchantment, sleeping peaceably unfurled beyond destined reawakening, condemned to limbo

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Scott Thirtyseven

Date: 3/28/2017 8:50:00 AM

well articulated... most certainly. What a wonderful, wordy, read.

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 3/4/2017 7:48:00 AM

Yes at times life can feel like this, thankfully at some point spring arrives.

Lim'Rik Flats

Date: 2/12/2017 10:46:00 AM

Warps, waves 'n weaves, hope you've tricks up your sleaves;-). Howdy

Darren White

Date: 1/31/2017 11:39:00 PM

I hope you will return. That you will feel better too! I'll wait for you.

Maurice Yvonne

Date: 1/23/2017 4:51:00 AM

This is sublime. A Fav!

Darren White

Date: 1/7/2017 12:35:00 PM

It's a sort of hibernation, isn't it, Paloma? Whatever you do, and wherever you are, just know that I will be thinking of you :)

Jannie Breedt

Date: 1/7/2017 3:43:00 AM

For me it seems that you need that alone time with the cat curled up by the heater or maybe its just my mood i read in it with the rain softly murmers outside. ( its summer down here)

Freddie Robinson Jr.

Date: 1/4/2017 12:10:00 PM

A very interesting poem, Paloma. Although, I personally don't believe in purgatory, or in this case, limbo, I do love reading the imagined realness of it's existence. Like Dante's Inferno. This poem gives limbo a gracious, ethereal appearance. Excellent poem. Love and hugs to you, dear.

Jean Murray

Date: 1/4/2017 9:42:00 AM

A well articulated limbo lore.

Daniel Turner

Date: 1/4/2017 8:32:00 AM

So I'm guessing Santa did not stop at your house either. Nice to see you this morning, Paloma:)

Heidi Sands

Date: 1/4/2017 7:47:00 AM

Welcome back Paloma. Very nice one here ! :)

Alexis Y.

Date: 1/4/2017 6:35:00 AM

Hi Paloma, It's good to see you posting again. This is totally you and your style. Good content, imagery and picture:-) Alexis PS, Happy New Year!

Paloma P
Date: 1/4/2017 7:17:00 AM

Thanks so much Alexis, I missed you too. Happy New Year my poetic friend! Chris mentioned you asked about me, you're a sweetheart.

White Wolf

Date: 1/4/2017 6:31:00 AM

This is right up my alley! Very relatable! And well worth the wait. Great stuff, Paloma.

Paloma P
Date: 1/4/2017 7:12:00 AM

You like the dark side, I know. :) Thanks Rick!

Chris Green

Date: 1/4/2017 6:23:00 AM

Well, it looks like someone has been released from this limbo sentence...perhaps for good behavior? :) Life feels like this at times, like running on ice, our feet move, our mind wants but we get nowhere fast. Nicely describe Paloma and welcome back. You have been missed here.

Paloma P
Date: 1/4/2017 7:11:00 AM

Life is wicked sometimes, getting in the way of poetry. :) I sure did miss you, thanks Chris.