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I’m crying louder and louder
But still there is no one to hear,
Dying inside lost without you near.
I reach for you only to find empty space,
No longer do I feel your saving grace.

Time passes slowly for me in my living hell
But there is no one to tell no on who’d care,
There isn’t a soul around to listen to me.
The reality I live the pain I feel you do not see,
It seems death is my only chance to be free.

I was once a angel full of beauty and grace
But I allowed one who’s soul was damned to lead me astray,
I turned my face from you, fell from heaven in all haste.
I allowed all the good I had done to be for naught,
I forgot all the good and mercy for me that you taught.

My spirit called out to you 
But my soul you could not redeem,
For I’m not simply broken but’ ruined.
The spirit of the broken you may still be able to fix,
But that which is ruined  you can not complete the mix.
One must simply wait to bury the damned,
For there is no way to save the soul of the condemned!!

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  1. Date: 6/8/2012 8:15:00 AM
    A beautiful day full of sunshine and good cheer. I am so happy to be able to read your poetry this morning Christal. I wish you a weekend of sunshine and joy and hope you continue to find the inspiration to continue your writing. Will be back reading come Monday I hope. Love, Carol