Get Your Premium Membership

Concrete Steps

Concrete Steps Concrete steps took the old woman with her cane The last hours fell on her sidewalk awkward gait There is nothing like a walk to town Flowing rain, following shadows down Buildings changing into complex shapes in fading light We were sad to see her go, though It was not her nature to be held back Along the narrow closing road She took alley ways far from the shops They were closed Everyone knew that One foot was bad, the other slow from lost grace and age None of that mattered, in her travels, and who had time for facts She headed in her own circles by cane and foot Which took direction to, no special place or path There was no reason to go out at this late hour And the city is too far from home If she finds her way back unharmed we will be happy Her shoes are waiting here, where she had left them There is always the concern for broken glass Concrete steps must be measured on the path When walking with naked feet along the street

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 10/10/2014 9:01:00 PM
Amazing poem, Earl. The description of the old lady, and her persistence despite the devil of old age, is greatly expressed. The imagery, and metaphoric undertone was also impressive. Enjoyable overall. Check out some of my poems, might find some you like. Peace.
Login to Reply
Schumacker Avatar
Earl Schumacker
Date: 10/10/2014 9:07:00 PM
Hi Jiril, Thank you so much for commenting. I enjoyed reading your views on my work and glad that you found merit in it. I will certainly read your creations. Have a great night. Earl
Date: 10/10/2014 6:14:00 PM
Added you to my list of fav poets.
Login to Reply
Schumacker Avatar
Earl Schumacker
Date: 10/10/2014 8:56:00 PM
Hi Maurice, That is high praise and an honor coming from you. You are clearly a strong and noble poet in your own right. I appreciate it. Thanks. Take care. Earl
Date: 10/10/2014 6:12:00 PM
A very touching poem. You are a fine poet my friend.
Login to Reply
Schumacker Avatar
Earl Schumacker
Date: 10/10/2014 8:58:00 PM
Hi Maurice, Thank you so much. I always appreciate your observations. Have a great night. Earl

Book: Shattered Sighs