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+ Hello, Concrete form is usually takes the objects, it's describing and I saw it from EWTN Catalog., I just tried but the outcome is bad because I turned it into the contest so we know this one will not win
http://poets.com/jacqueline-mendoza--57/concrete-form-our-father
but I can put it here... for u to see the actual look
Our Father,
Who art
In Heaven,
Hallowed be
Thy Name.
Your kingdom come,Your will be done on Earth as it is in Heaven.
Give us this day our daily bread, and forgive us our trespasses,
as we
forgive those
Who trespass
Against us.
And lead
Us not
Into temptation,
But deliver
Us from
Evil. Amen.
GOD'S BLESSINGS... +
"I AM THE LIVING PROOF- Jacqueline's Life, Purpose and Parables"
BOOK IN PRODUCTION, + LEASE WAIT MAR- MAY 2012, THANKS