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Concert Contamination

I stand in awe, paralyzed Bottomless pit below, where feet should stand Boundless steps, take one more, then another Am I alone, in a sea of nineteen thousand? I wonder, is it just me Who's lungs compress the closer we become Nearly there, complete the infinate descent A memory perpetually imprinted, will not be undone I contemplate leaving, turn back The rush overwhelms me, is it too late? I've waited a lifetime and a day, I'm here A bumbling hum accumulates, then resonates I understand how it unites How it heals, destroys, runs fingers through nerves Drags buried demons from shadows, kicking, screaming A final standing ovation, the least that's deserved I reflect as the curtains drop Last wire unplugged, last light deluminated Bottomless pit, where feet once stomped Can't shake the music from my mind, I'm contaminated 25th August 2011

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 8/27/2011 3:28:00 AM
hey Jodie congrats on your great win, sounds scary David
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Date: 8/26/2011 10:06:00 PM
I feel the atmosphere and the trepidation as I read this. congratulations, well done. Margaret
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Date: 8/26/2011 7:19:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved placement in Paula Swanson's "Choose your theme" contest Jodie. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/25/2011 10:45:00 PM
also,incredibly unique.
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Date: 8/25/2011 10:44:00 PM
Jodie, this is SOUP-ERB!!! A fave on this beautful writing. Congrats on your win.
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Date: 8/25/2011 7:52:00 PM
An interesting take on the contest. Congratulations on your win. Joyce
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Date: 8/25/2011 7:42:00 PM
Congrats Jodie on another sweet success with this exceptional entry luv.. way to go..
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