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rock bottom buried under heavy layers of stones and gravel a dangerous liaison with melancholy breathing in poisonous dust from crushed impact a heavy weight rests on the mind has made itself too settled for comfort but there must be a shifting of the light inconceivable at first gradual until life becomes bearable once more 21st November 2023

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Date: 11/21/2023 5:57:00 AM
I remember a former poem of yours where you claim to have reached your nadir. I see you're still having a tough time. Hoping you find the light
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Tom Woody
Date: 11/21/2023 7:58:00 AM
Much of our suffering in life is
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Kai Michael Neumann
Date: 11/21/2023 7:49:00 AM
Thank you Tom. A tough time indeed. Mostly self-inflicted.
Date: 11/21/2023 4:03:00 AM
So well done. That last verse says much and it is hopeful for all. Blessings. Fave. (My sweet nephew bottomed out and left us two years ago.)
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Kai Michael Neumann
Date: 11/21/2023 7:50:00 AM
Thank you Kim. I have started to write again. Slowly recovering from self-inflicted hardship.

Book: Shattered Sighs