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CONCEALED IS MY LOVE

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CONCEALED IS MY LOVE

Can it be so my only love
has me but to cherish a memory,
rather than to place me above
any heart that has ever set her free?
I take the final place of last
amid prizes of her loves she has won.
Might I interpret that all amassed
is despondent to the quotient of none.
Yet,careless is her soul that roams
long,beseeching that which is heaven-sent.
Frivolous;marks her quest unknown
for a glowing love,time renders unfervent.
If she looks behind her I shall be
true acolyte upon the brink of her past.
Beyond a love's ululate decree
she will hearken and see a love meant to last.


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  1. Date: 12/20/2011 8:31:00 AM
    Merry Christmas and Happy New Year to you and yours Eric. Love and blessings, Carol

  1. Date: 11/14/2009 6:31:00 PM
    Eric, this is excellent! Your write very well-this is going down as one of my favs! Good luck to you and Katherine! Peace and love, Audrey

  1. Date: 11/2/2009 8:45:00 PM
    Hello, Eric. Interesting poem you wrote. Thank you for your comment on my "Visit To Grandma". Love, Iolanda

  1. Date: 10/31/2009 4:58:00 PM
    Amazing!...How did you do that?! By the way, thanks for the kind sentiments on my poem. ( Ruldolph's new job ) God bless. Milt