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Concealed By a Bramble Bush

Concealed by a bramble bush, Fixated to her tight swathe. She takes a little look around, Then peels off her clothes to bathe. Standing there with just a pink panty, The small of back had perfect dimples. She hesitated for a while in the cool breeze, That kissed her skin to form goose pimples. Hugging herself, she dipped a toe in the water, Then performs a shivery dance. My eyes made love to her beauty, My body succumbed to their romance. She turned to the side as if walking a tight rope, And skimmed the water surface with her foot. I saw her perky mountainous breasts, And almost let out a coyote’s crying woof. A goddess, a picture, and artists dream, Every man’s vision of heavenly thighs. I stood unblinkabley mesmerised, Thinking “Thank you for my bramble bush disguise.” This is how I met my second wife, Jane, by the way And love her with the same passion as that very day I found out later that she was the sister of Glen Who is my close Imaginary friend *I think I killed the end for you all :-)

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 3/31/2011 6:48:00 AM
funny poem.... Jane is a real fantasy girl. Keep your thoughts off the stimulus plan or you will make a mountain out of a mole hill. ;}
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Date: 3/19/2011 5:33:00 AM
okay sid, you made your point.. i was pleasantly surprised with the ending! lol, from sentimental to ribauld--- amazing! :) huggs, nette
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Date: 3/18/2011 11:21:00 PM
Certainly an exciting write Sidney my friend.. dramatic to the end and full of passion.. OK to have imaginery friends.. makes life interesting luv.. happy weekend...
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Date: 3/18/2011 10:25:00 PM
lol you sure did silly.. but I expected that, you tend to twist things on us ;) thanks for the laughter early morning Sid.. love W
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