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Comrades

Comrades, The future is over. Nothing prevailed. Sort out whatever is left. I’m going to sleep, To wake-up in a new dream. I’m bringing my wife, daughter, And the rest of my loved ones. I’m not making any promises. People keep shouting if there’s any rope On the boat for when we leave. I don’t know what they’re talking about. I’m constantly swimming.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 4/21/2016 11:15:00 AM
Except for the confusion over the name of the poem, as I read your thoughts within the poem I realized you and I seem to be swimming along toward . . . er . . . Didn't know this was a contest winner . . . Congratulations!
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Date: 12/6/2015 11:40:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, Matt!
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Date: 12/4/2015 11:11:00 PM
Wonderful poem and win Matt... big congrats!
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Date: 12/4/2015 10:03:00 PM
Matt, Congratulations on your sweet win. Enjoyed your entry. LUV SKAT
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Book: Shattered Sighs