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Computer Dear

Computer dear Everyday when I switch on my computer, I say to myself, Gets up from sleep at my one touch, Recharged, he appears with a huge smile, Is he in love with me ? Taking all my commands throughout the day, And still giving his best, Eye to eye without a flicker, Working with me in unison, I have the keys to his heart, As he unlocks my brain, Takes me to google, And we travel around the world, Keeps me updated what come may, One button click and its a child's play, Anything that becomes obsolete, He helps me by selection of delete, Each data that will sincerely behave, I am able to place it under save, He is my work passion, a must obsession, Modern life, technology will surely steer, There's no life without you computer dear ! Written April 8th, 2015 For contest "Computer poem" by Carol Eastman Awarded 1st place

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Date: 4/18/2015 6:57:00 PM
Nice win... LINDA
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Date: 4/18/2015 8:49:00 AM
So glad to see this one on the winners list Upma!
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Date: 4/16/2015 10:24:00 PM
oh, I just love your sweet approach to "him" This is one of the cutest I have read, Dr. Upma. A SEVEN.
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Date: 4/16/2015 4:15:00 PM
Yes, Dr. Upma, how did we ever live without them! I like all the positives you image in your poem about this modern tech! Congrats on your win. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 4/16/2015 3:07:00 PM
loved the personification - congrats on your win Dr Sharma:-) Hugs Jan xx
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Date: 4/11/2015 1:20:00 AM
I have the sneaking suspicion you wish the computer was a man!!!!!! LOL Loved this!
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Date: 4/10/2015 3:08:00 PM
Upma, I like your computer poem, 7, you have a "nice" computer mine can be very mean at times best of luck in the contest and thanks for visiting my poetry
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Date: 4/10/2015 12:45:00 PM
Sweet and lovely take on this computer theme, Upma! Computers are such a help, till the hard-disc goes booooom! gl in the contest. // paul
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Date: 4/10/2015 12:18:00 PM
Reads like a winner to me..Way to go for the contest..Using personification is a good method to use..Thanks for your review of my work..Sara
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Date: 4/10/2015 8:26:00 AM
I like your use of personification. Well done Upma.
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Date: 4/10/2015 7:22:00 AM
"And we travel around the world!"... this is the amazing and wonderful part to me! Methinks this will do well in Carol's contest! Hugs, Jack xxx
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Date: 4/9/2015 11:45:00 PM
so true, so true!! I bet this does well in the contest. I loved your comment "killer thoughts!!" to my senryu.
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Date: 4/8/2015 1:00:00 PM
Adorable poem, my dear Dr Upma. It should and must do well, for it is ever sweet. Hugs to you.
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Date: 4/8/2015 7:37:00 AM
This is and interesting observance and a probable peek into the future of relationships of mankind and machine. I enjoyed your thoughts Dr.
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