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Cemeteries as themes Certainty of s a d words Crypts, tombs and vaults for sure Creaking gates s q u e a k and groan Captive of the long dead Caressing ghosts that love C O M E into my abyss . . . _____________________ August 23, 2016 Poetry/Pleisades/Verse/Composing Copyright Protected, ID 16- 822-565-0 All Rights Reserved. Written under Pseudonym. Written for the contest, Pleisades C sponsor, Kim Merryman Fifth Place

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Date: 8/26/2016 2:03:00 PM
Always a pleasure to return with congratulations, Constance. Well done! // paul
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Date: 8/26/2016 12:25:00 PM
Constance, do you really compose poems in cemeteries? I've always been fascinated with reading the headstones. Congrats on your win with your ghostly Pleiades! Blessings!
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Date: 8/26/2016 4:16:00 AM
- Congratulations on your winning poems, B.W. :) - hugs and :)
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Date: 8/26/2016 1:36:00 AM
Congratulations on your win, Constance:)
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Date: 8/26/2016 12:37:00 AM
A slight chill passes through me as I type my congrats, Constance. Viv x
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Date: 8/25/2016 9:50:00 PM
Congratulations on your win Constance! 7 ; )
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Date: 8/25/2016 7:32:00 PM
Sad and dark, but so well said, Broken Wings. congratulations on your fine win in the 'Pleiades C' contest! Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 8/25/2016 7:15:00 PM
I really loved yours, dear!! Congrats. Now time to start D's!!!
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Date: 8/25/2016 5:20:00 PM
Broken Wings, congrats on your placement...this poem was one of my favorites...:)-luloo
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Date: 8/25/2016 5:06:00 PM
Dropping back with my congrats Constance:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 8/25/2016 10:13:00 AM
You compose in your favourite environment, Constance! A captivating Pleiades with an equally captivating ending. Regards // paul
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Date: 8/24/2016 11:04:00 AM
This is nice and absolutely beautiful. I love every it of this piece of yours and I am happy reading from the creativity of your wonderful mind after a long period of time.
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Date: 8/23/2016 3:58:00 PM
thanks for the win in your teaers contest. love this, my friend x
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Date: 8/23/2016 3:49:00 PM
wow, what a marvelous way you did this form. I am jealous!! what oh what will I do. Just another lame one that scores less than a three. haha!! You are so good with these.
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Date: 8/23/2016 11:07:00 AM
More like "Decomposing" Lol This is a great Halloween poem too, Constance. I love this dark write. Good luck!
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Date: 8/23/2016 9:05:00 AM
Oooh I love it :)
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Date: 8/23/2016 8:45:00 AM
I'm with Jan on this one, it is typically you, has your signature style, which is so easily recognizable, and that's a good thing, should do well in contest.
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Date: 8/23/2016 5:21:00 AM
Perfect for your writing style Constance...If I was judging blind I would have known this was written by you :-) I agree with TJ - a great last line good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 8/23/2016 3:01:00 AM
Excellent verse. Well penned. Thanks for sharing it.
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