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Complications of Charity

Should we that have no lack give of our store Of food to those who live in daily need When they cannot deny the pressing greed Of cravings and addictions crying, "More For me, and you'll forget that you are poor, And how your heart has never ceased to bleed From beatings and abuse for ev'ry deed Opposed, or else that made a conscience sore By doing right"? This then ought we to say To those who claim providing clothes will aid Their errant ways: " 'O Lord, when saw we thee In hunger or in thirst along the way, Or naked, or in prison,' and He said, 'The least of these ye served as unto Me.' " {Miltonic Sonnet} (Written April 28th, 2014) {Loosely quoted from Matthew 25}

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Date: 7/29/2014 11:57:00 PM
It's so nice to actually read a sonnet this well done. I look forward to reading more of your work. I'd replace the "and" in line 6 though. You're work needs no filler words.
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Date: 5/14/2014 6:12:00 AM
Wow, Isaiah, this is so profound. Greed has consumed our society and many people are too complacent, allowing others to go hungry and live in poverty. That last line from the Bible sums up the message so well. Excellent writing! Congratulations, Carolyn
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Date: 5/13/2014 11:24:00 PM
A great sonnet and a great win. Congratulations. Love, Joyce
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Date: 5/13/2014 8:17:00 PM
So well done, what a fine win and you should be so proud. BG
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Date: 5/13/2014 7:37:00 PM
It's very sad, the only way to have choice is to have a range of responses. Taking care of self & family should come first if all could do this [with most single woman still only earning 25,000 a year at 75 cents to the dollar a man earns? It's not likely is it?]Congrad's on your win Light & Love
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Date: 5/13/2014 3:05:00 PM
Isaiah, this poem is the best example of proper enjambment in a Miltonic Sonnet that I have seen in this contest. Well thought out theme and execution. Congratulations!
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Date: 5/13/2014 2:57:00 PM
Isaiah, so well said and scripture beautifully integrated into this sonnet.
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Date: 5/13/2014 1:55:00 PM
I love what you did with this passage. Beautiful message here ! Congrats to you!
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Date: 5/13/2014 1:09:00 PM
isaiah, Congratulations:) in Craig's, "Miltonic Sonnet" contest... xox~ LINDA
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Date: 5/13/2014 1:05:00 PM
Way to go ....# 2..Sara
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Date: 5/13/2014 11:58:00 AM
Much to ponder in this sonnet, Isaiah. Congratulations on your win. Elaine
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Date: 5/13/2014 9:11:00 AM
Congratulations, Isaiah! Awesome write!
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Date: 5/13/2014 8:29:00 AM
Wonderful write Isaiah ! I wud rather say side effects of charity ,,, just as taking medicine is a must no matter its complications,,charity one does out of an intense quick emotion ! Congrats on great win !
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Date: 5/11/2014 1:48:00 AM
wow, it sure has that miltonic flavor to it, Isaiah. Yes, it is quite a quandary to see drug users asking for charity. I've heard stories of them getting upset when people tried to give them food because they only wanted money to buy drugs instead of food . Complications is a most fitting word in that title of your sonnet.
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Date: 5/5/2014 10:08:00 PM
I enjoyed this read! Thanks
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