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Complicated

my current ex has dumped me 14 times in fourteen years (does she really mean it:)?....DOH complicated tunes n lovers .... make you swoon, over no other... incantation, swamps the moon.... so melodic the tune... for the male n female others.... time will pay with gold doubloons...... sorry Lizzie Treetop i slipped....Don Im just another player with words ....don't worry about the sad poets they do get positive feedback....feedback on the soup is good for the ego, then you get the guy who says rubbish:) he may be right too:) but then the support comes in ....negative , overun with positive ....feels good too:)

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Date: 6/17/2013 4:15:00 PM
rubbish, Don , negative never overruns the positive ,, ;}
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Date: 1/29/2012 7:54:00 PM
You did very well with this positive write my friend, Don! This poem brought me smiles and happiness that I much needed! I really enjoyed this poem this fine evening! Glorious Work!!
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