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Had it been my expectations  or was 
it betrayal.                 
The insights withdraw insanity 
climbing up with prayers 
In real time when I was never real,
In hopeless nights when I was never 
All of a sudden had the world 
changed or had my devotion
The birds dint stop chirping,n sky 
expanding, n I was still in motion
Motion never ceases but getting 
ceased is not motion 
With words that I play getting more 
trapped in emotion
 through the frame less windows  
when they pry
Getting self sustained........they cry

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  1. Date: 2/28/2013 7:37:00 AM
    really nice write

  1. Date: 2/4/2013 4:28:00 PM
    Ohmygosh. This is...empowering. It flows and draws you in. I think you did a brilliant job on this write (:

  1. Date: 1/31/2013 7:38:00 PM
    Welcome to the soup, Complex would be a good title, valiant effort.

    jain Avatar Avani jain
    Date: 2/1/2013 2:10:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks for d welcome N also thank you for the suggession
  1. Date: 1/31/2013 7:48:00 AM
    welcome to poetrysoup.nice write.

    jain Avatar Avani jain
    Date: 2/1/2013 2:11:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank u so much :-)