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The breeze at dawn has secrets to tell you Wake up my love it seems to whisper Breathe in my celestial fragrance Which I stole before it was light From your treasured jasmine Wafting your casements to share with all. (Line 7: Rumi) Name : Balveen Cheema Date : July 24, 2015 Contest : Complete The Lines!

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Date: 12/19/2015 6:54:00 PM
Balveen, :) Congratulations on having your poem featured on the soups Home Page. I'm also sending an early Christmas Message with Hugs. May you have a blessed Christmas and a happy New Year.. Good luck in all you do, just in case I don't stop a second time before the 2015 ends ~SKAT LOVE~
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Balveen Cheema
Date: 12/21/2015 7:20:00 AM
Skat, thanks for your appreciation and warm wishes! Wish you happiness and fulfilment in your life. Please send me your email.
Date: 12/16/2015 7:19:00 AM
Greetings Balveen. Congrats for having your poem featured in the poetrysoup homepage! ;-)
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Balveen Cheema
Date: 12/21/2015 7:21:00 AM
Teddy thanks for your kind greetings!

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