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Complete the Circle

Closing these red stained blue eyes forgetting the world not letting them see dreaming of days when our circle will be complete no beginning, no end you'll become my lover my future, my friend there will be no leaving no good byes no more late night cries my love will encircle your heart as you rest upon my chest fireflies will light up our night as forever I'll hold you tight

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 3/13/2015 9:55:00 AM
Tim, your creativity is inspiring, a circle of completion in your love to be whole again. Wonderful and inspiring a 7 dear friend. I am seeing a different side of you. :)
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Date: 3/12/2015 3:05:00 PM
Beautifully romantic, sad and happy!
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Date: 3/10/2015 11:52:00 PM
You have set this romantic scene and let fireflies be your candles Tim. I love it!
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Date: 3/10/2015 9:41:00 PM
Very nice write ....best wishes
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Date: 3/10/2015 11:37:00 AM
How romantic Tim.. a7+.. nad
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Date: 3/10/2015 11:25:00 AM
How beautiful and romantic this is.I can feel the pang of absence and the wanton feeling of longing.So so deep this is.To my favs
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Date: 3/9/2015 11:22:00 PM
Very passionate write, Tim. The circle of love is the circle of life.
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Tim Smith
Date: 3/9/2015 11:25:00 PM
Thanks Eileen.... I do believe that is true...hugs Tim
Date: 3/9/2015 10:50:00 PM
romantic to the core!
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Tim Smith
Date: 3/9/2015 11:24:00 PM
Thank you my friend

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