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Compassion Abounds

Compassion does abound in this modern world we live Where animal and man return ones love to give An element we all do fear could have taken all their lives But this was not the day, that fate could contrive To enter a burning building where their lives take second best Training and their bravery, a heroes form of zest Within these darkened realms, aflame and spewing of smoke Any life that's spared, we deprive the smoking choke For outside this smouldering building lies a bundle of stirring rags Blackened canine features, their lives in deadening flag Whilst alone on the sidewalk a hero sits in thought Despair hits his heart in helpless strained distraught His head in his hands now lifted, stirred by whining sounds Towards him walks the mother, he turns in total astound Leaning down to pet her, compassion fills his eyes She licks his face to thank him, all saved and so alive

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 2/23/2011 4:37:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win in Joyce's contest James. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/4/2011 4:56:00 PM
Congratulations on your win James. You have great descriptiveness and rhyming in this entry.
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Date: 2/4/2011 1:30:00 PM
Hi James - Congratulations on your win in Joyce's contest. Best wishes, Kory"
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Date: 2/4/2011 12:34:00 PM
Another wonderful story from you, James!! Congratulations! love, Carrie
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Date: 2/4/2011 12:19:00 PM
Congrats James on your well deserved win in the contest !Enjoyed your poem--kashinath
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Date: 2/4/2011 9:35:00 AM
Wonderful writing, James. Many congrats on your BIG WIN! Lainie
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Date: 2/4/2011 9:34:00 AM
I'm so glad to see your poem in the winners' circle, James. Congratulations on your win! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 2/4/2011 7:51:00 AM
Congrats James on your winning poem in Joyce's contest with this extraordinary entry luv.. enjoy another top ten victory ...
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Date: 2/4/2011 7:20:00 AM
James, good to see you in the top 10. Agape, Moses
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Date: 2/4/2011 7:12:00 AM
This is awesome.Tons of congratulations for this victory
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Date: 2/4/2011 1:07:00 AM
deeply endearing, james... my happy CHEERS for you for the win!! :) huggs, nette
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Date: 2/3/2011 10:47:00 PM
Congratulations on you wonderful 7th place win as I expected, Highlander! Love, Annalise
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Date: 2/3/2011 10:12:00 PM
Great job, James. I so enjoyed reading all of these emotional poems. Glad to see your name here. Love, Joyce
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Date: 1/21/2011 5:31:00 PM
Firefighters are amazing...their bravery, compassion, just out of this world. If this is for Joyce's contest, it will do well as it has captured the theme so well, James. Love, Annalise
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Date: 1/21/2011 1:01:00 PM
We all like to read about heros, and you have given us another to see. Good job. Thanks for reviewing mine as well.
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Date: 1/21/2011 5:18:00 AM
It is like you took that picture of JJ and made it your own with your words James.. All the best with this gem for JJ's contest ;)
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Date: 1/20/2011 4:21:00 PM
Terrific entry, James. I love the way you have the fireman sitting in thought and filled with despair until the mother dog walks over to him and licks his face. Very touching! Wishing you success in Joyce's contest. The entries are just flying in and she's already saying it will be hard to judge them. Now that you've helped judge a contest, you can understand what she means. Love, Carolyn
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