Compass

Envelope life with firm arms,be for it pleasure windings and uprisings take for measure inevitables that are thrown down your path sensibily minded doing the math for you are that compass you do choose north east south or west,upto you if you lose. Paul Beadnall 10/9/11 Sponsor Constance La France ~ A Rambling Poet ~ Contest Name Six Lines of Poetry, Please

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Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 9/13/2011 8:58:00 PM

Congratulations on the win in the contest of constance, Paul

Paul Beadnall
Date: 9/16/2011 12:01:00 PM

Thanks alot Dr.Ram. Appreciated blessings from Paul

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 9/13/2011 3:58:00 PM

CONGRATS PAUL ON ANOTHER EXCITING WIN WITH THIS AMAZING POETRY ..WONDERFUL WORDS LUV..

Paul Beadnall
Date: 9/16/2011 12:00:00 PM

Thanks very mucch Linda - Marie appreciated as always from Paul.

Jack Horne

Date: 9/13/2011 10:34:00 AM

My apologies for missing so many contest results - many congrats on all your wins : )

Paul Beadnall
Date: 9/16/2011 11:58:00 AM

Cheers Jack,always appreciated blessings from Paul

Bob Quigley

Date: 9/13/2011 10:31:00 AM

Congratulations on your win Paul Well done

Paul Beadnall
Date: 9/16/2011 11:57:00 AM

Cheers Bob, appreciated mate blessings from Paul.

Ralph Taylor

Date: 9/13/2011 9:23:00 AM

Congrats on your win, Paul. Excellent write. Nice going. Ralph

Paul Beadnall
Date: 9/16/2011 11:56:00 AM

Thanks alot Ralph always appreciated blessings from Paul.

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 9/13/2011 8:11:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in Constance's "Six Lines Of Poetry, Please" contest Paul. Love,Carol

Paul Beadnall
Date: 9/16/2011 11:55:00 AM

Thanks Carol appreciated blessings from Paul.

Jack Ross Jr.

Date: 9/11/2011 9:36:00 PM

Terrific write mate..filled with truths, but the last line deviates somewhat even doing the math and making the wisest decisions many many still lose, guess it is fate, desitny, I believe it is the will of God and the trial by fire that he said we would face....great poem...good luck on contest....with love.....your mate old Jack