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June 12,2007 compare. With every hug I want you more. With every goodbye it leaves me sore. With every stare there’s the butterflies that dance. And with every kiss there’s that sweet romance. That I have dreamt of for so long. I Cant see the way you look at me. Only the way I want us to be. I cant see the way you love me so. All the questions simply answered with I don’t know. I cant see your tenderness. All I can do is to continue to dream of it. You are blind to the way I love you. You are helpless to the way I care. You are useless to my tenderness. And you are breathless to my love beyond compare. By:Krystyna Luke

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Date: 2/23/2009 5:19:00 PM
like the last line alot...catherine
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Date: 2/23/2009 4:38:00 PM
I do see the comparison of how you feel compared to the way you think he feels. It makes a person almost feel lost. Nice write Krys
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