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Tiny boardwalk along the Halifax River Waiting to see what “catch” nature will deliver Royal Palms’ fronds rustle in fall’s gentle breeze No noisy distractions from teens on their jet skis Cute baby seagull swims above my fishing line Unlike a pet, this bird doesn’t bark, bite or whine He knows me well and I can tell he wants to eat So I toss bait and he bobs his head for the treat Yet he lingers, craving a flounder or redfish You see, my companion and I have the same wish Quick tug at my line; what prize might lie below? A hefty blue crab emerges as my cargo With claws and feathers interacting, I’m amused But break up the fight so no animal’s abused Such friends make life better for one who lives alone In a pandemic when isolation’s seeds are thrown Fishermen appreciate little rays of hope That grant a smile and make it easier to cope August 15, 2020 For Silent One’s “Sanctuary” poetry contest

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Date: 9/8/2020 8:05:00 PM
Very much enjoyed this scene of nature and the love with which it was written. All the characters are vividly painted and sacrificing, even the fish!
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Date: 8/27/2020 9:51:00 AM
You turn isolation into a delightful encounter with nature, Carolyn. Indeed we all find solace in our personal sanctuaries! I see that congratulations are in order...well done! Hugs // paul
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Date: 8/25/2020 3:30:00 PM
Carolyn, there are two monoku contests that I bet you would do great with. Hurry and let's see some!
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Date: 8/24/2020 7:37:00 PM
Carolyn: I love this poem, rich with details, nice couplets and great rhyme scheme. You make me feel that I am right there with you fishing!
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Date: 8/24/2020 12:17:00 PM
Wonderful Carolyn. I can see you quietly fishing and enjoying the sunshine and the birds. Love the pic. great stuff. God Bless, JB
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Date: 8/23/2020 5:28:00 PM
Hello Carolyn ... an old friend once it's great to catch a fish, but even better to be fishing. You paint a nice scene in your couplet to balance out some of the isolation we are going through - thank you Carolyn - Lindsay
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Date: 8/23/2020 3:16:00 PM
Back with congrats to you, Carolyn, for your big win with this heartwarming tale. Bravo, Gershon
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Date: 8/23/2020 5:43:00 AM
Glad to see this poem climbing the best poem chart, Carolyn. BIG congrats my friend on your podium win in Silent's contest.
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Date: 8/22/2020 1:49:00 PM
Big congatulations to you. I know how much you love this wonderful environment as sanctuary!
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Date: 8/22/2020 9:36:00 AM
Real friends are a treasure - a so peaceful scene you have imaginatively created my dear friend, what a darling little feathered friend you have made Carolyn - stunning poem. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
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Date: 8/22/2020 8:42:00 AM
Huge Congratulations, Carolyn. Perfect cadence, touching sentiment. (first time I've seen this) Very glad to read it, extremely easy to enjoy.
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Date: 8/22/2020 8:13:00 AM
Tranquil and serene, I just love these kind of places, and not hearing the modern world, as sadly it destroys such scenes. Reading your words, it felt like I was walking along the 'Caledonian Canal' in the Highland's here, very nice, James xx
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Date: 8/22/2020 5:55:00 AM
Sounds beautiful with so many great lines.. flows and rhymes so well.. Nice take on the contest.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
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Carolyn Devonshire
Date: 8/22/2020 8:59:00 AM
Thank you, Silent One.
Date: 8/22/2020 5:02:00 AM
Beautiful lines with a heart touching story with lovely companions, who always remain a friend only. " Such friends make life better for one who lives alone, In a pandemic when isolation’s seeds are thrown," With best Wishes df Carolyn...Ravindra
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Date: 8/21/2020 9:12:00 PM
What a heart warming story, Carolyn, especially the baby seagull trying to steal your catch - and the line about finding hope and easier to cope - we could all use some of that now - best wishes for the contest.
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Date: 8/21/2020 7:29:00 AM
Hi Carolyn, it is a joy to read your peaceful poem today. The words paint the canvas of my mind such wonderful images of nature. There is such peace to be found within nature. another beautiful write from a golden pen. Best wishes for the contest. Have a wonderful Friday. Hugs....Mike. XX
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Date: 8/20/2020 4:31:00 AM
Such a lovely piece Carolyn, a joy to read with good thoughts of nature too. Blessings always,Gordon
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Date: 8/19/2020 7:33:00 PM
The poetry Carolyn, is one of sheer peace, its the feeling i get when reading this wonderful gem. Stay Safe my friend..Harry
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Date: 8/18/2020 9:04:00 PM
Carolyn, Delightful trio each to their own understanding of life in isolation. -Richard
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Date: 8/18/2020 5:41:00 PM
Such an unlikely heartwarming(!) tale. I see now that you are a fisher(wo)man! Good for you, Carolyn. Peaceful Rivers and Streams, Gershon
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Date: 8/17/2020 6:48:00 PM
I like this a lot. Especially liked the line about having the same wish as your companion! Well done, a FAV for me! pat
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Date: 8/17/2020 3:55:00 PM
Great write and imagery, Carolyn, good luck in the contest. Hugs Eve
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Date: 8/17/2020 2:24:00 PM
One hopes the crab learned not to be so crabby! Aloha! Rico
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Date: 8/16/2020 2:52:00 PM
Your poem is a delight my friend.. splendidly traversing beauty of nature in lovely rhyming verses. Enjoyed the details that create wonderful imagery like being there with you. A definite FAVE for me, Carolyn.
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Carolyn Devonshire
Date: 8/17/2020 8:13:00 AM
Thanks for your kind comments, Vijay!
Date: 8/16/2020 2:03:00 PM
I enjoyed this Carolyn. A special place to be :)
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Carolyn Devonshire
Date: 8/17/2020 8:14:00 AM
Somehow, being near the water lifts my spirits. Thanks for reading, Heidi.
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