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Companion For Life

I arrive when life's first breath pays its toll And stay after death till' visits are cold I'm the deep well you draw from always full You find me in dark and light never old I've felt every pain that you've ever known And spilled out of your eyes from laughter's smile I've followed each footstep as you have grown Traced down your face from a love's denial I am here until your death when we part Will appear in eyes of your deepest fears I'm buried well in the soul of your heart I'm the emotion creating your tears We met at your birth, at death I will leave I'll be the tears that fall with those who grieve 2/8/18

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 3/1/2018 7:07:00 PM
Hello Fredric, the last two lines bring tears to my eyes.Have a nice evening my friend.
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Date: 2/18/2018 7:49:00 PM
Last two lines really reach their target...our heart. You did this so very very well. "Emotion creating your tears", ..same ..creating my joy. Congrats.
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Date: 2/14/2018 8:32:00 PM
Congrats for POTD, Frederick!
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Date: 2/12/2018 9:09:00 PM
Beautiful Frederic, congrats on POTD!
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Date: 2/11/2018 2:11:00 AM
Great message, great sonnet. Beautiful and a good 'thinking start' for my day. Thank you, Kai
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Date: 2/10/2018 9:37:00 PM
Very, very beautiful sonnet Frederic. Deeply meaningful. Congratulations on POTD!! ~Judy
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Date: 2/10/2018 7:39:00 PM
This is simply beautiful. Very 'soulful'. Love it! In favourites. Congrats Frederic.
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Date: 2/10/2018 5:30:00 PM
Great sonnet Frederic, congrats on POTD;-)
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Date: 2/10/2018 3:07:00 PM
Congratulations on pOTD, Frederic ! Hugs Eve ~`*
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Date: 2/10/2018 3:01:00 PM
such a wonderful sonnet Frederic many congrats on POTD... I learn so much about this form reading your wonderful works and hope to be able to write them as beautifully as you one day:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 2/10/2018 2:55:00 PM
- A beautiful poem for the day, Frederic - (Two wins in one day ... so joyful :) - Congratulations with a hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 2/10/2018 2:18:00 PM
How moving and tenderly beautiful Frederic. The tracks of our tears bear witness to our life. A deeply compelling and endearing poem, your closing couplet is superb. Congratulations on your well deserved POTD honors for your excellent poem. Warmest wishes. ~Susan
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Date: 2/10/2018 12:16:00 PM
the tear will appear in the presence of fear or in times when we cheer or when pain is severe or an accomplishment is near or when "i do" is what a bride hears and sometimes after too many beers and that is evidently clear....great personification frederic
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Date: 2/10/2018 12:11:00 PM
Wonderful sonnet, Frederic. Congratulations for having it honored as POTD.
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Date: 2/10/2018 12:00:00 PM
Beautiful Sonnet! Congrats on potd :) xomo
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Date: 2/10/2018 10:29:00 AM
Brilliant write Frederic, congratulations for POTD honors...
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Date: 2/10/2018 9:04:00 AM
So beautiful, Frederic! Congrats on POTD. Fave.
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Date: 2/10/2018 8:03:00 AM
Congratulations on POTD Frederic, a beautiful sonnet....Maria
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Date: 2/10/2018 7:11:00 AM
Congratulations on POTD Frederic with your well written sonnet, a joy to read. :))
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Date: 2/9/2018 6:16:00 PM
Gets better each time I read it Frederic, I rarely fave a poem but have this. One of your best. Take care, Richard
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Date: 2/8/2018 5:00:00 PM
Totally delightful, Frederic. A gem.
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Date: 2/8/2018 4:18:00 PM
I found something so beautiful, and a fav tonight. Thank you.
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Date: 2/8/2018 2:19:00 PM
My sonnets will never compate to yours Frederic, a lovely sonnet of dedication, how sad there are not many today who have a companion for life..
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