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rain showers turn into deluge - train delayed

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Date: 2/22/2014 4:36:00 PM
I am also reading Robert Petitt's comments as I go through your poems. He sure has seen many of them too!!
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Date: 1/22/2014 5:16:00 PM
Reminds me of Sheena Easton and her hit song "Morning Train".
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