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sign language communication between lovers lost for words looking with emotion in the eyes stirring passion with the touch of keen, trembling hands in silence ---------------------------------------------- Contest: Give Me A Sign (Septet II) Sponsor: Nette Onclaud Paul callus ~ 17th May 2015 Placed: 5th

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Date: 6/9/2015 11:05:00 AM
Oh yes, this is a lovely example of silent communication between lovers. Congrats to you too on the contest!
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Paul Callus
Date: 6/9/2015 2:49:00 PM
Thank you Janet. It's a pleasure having you stop by:) All the best. // paul
Date: 6/7/2015 6:53:00 PM
A wonderful romantic write, Paul! Congrats on your win! Love, Kim
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Date: 6/8/2015 2:29:00 AM
Thank you Kim. Glad you enjoyed. Have a lovely week! // paul
Date: 6/6/2015 11:24:00 PM
Paul, congratulations on your win. Forever **SKAT**
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Date: 6/7/2015 9:11:00 AM
Thank you Skat! :)
Date: 6/6/2015 9:00:00 PM
You have so many comments I didn't think I'd find a place to say...Congratulations!
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Date: 6/7/2015 9:07:00 AM
Thank you Judy! I'm glad you managed to squeeze in:) Have a lovely day! // paul
Date: 6/6/2015 3:34:00 PM
A very interesting take on the theme and the "sign language" of lovers. congrats
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Date: 6/6/2015 4:46:00 PM
Thank you John. Originally I started on proper sign language, but somehow changed track half way through, thus becoming a romantic poem!
Date: 6/6/2015 1:23:00 PM
just now seeing your reply to my comment. I am glad you ended up with something romantic instead of mere sign language. Congrats. I loved this one.
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Date: 6/6/2015 4:48:00 PM
Glad you do Andrea! Thanks. Hope you're enjoying your weekend. // paul
Date: 6/6/2015 10:19:00 AM
loved your take on the theme dropping back to give you my congrats:-) Hugs jan xx
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Jan Allison
Date: 6/6/2015 5:14:00 PM
:-) xx
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Date: 6/6/2015 5:06:00 PM
Thank you Jan! I enjoyed your winning entry, too....was pleased to see you right above me:) hugs // paul
Date: 6/6/2015 9:59:00 AM
Wonderful, Paul. Love speaks in so many silent ways! Congratulations on your fine win. Sandra
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Date: 6/6/2015 5:08:00 PM
Thank you Sandra; found it hard not to seek help from my romantic muse, so I gave in to her:) // paul
Date: 6/6/2015 8:20:00 AM
Excellent write Paul...Congrats on your win
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Date: 6/6/2015 5:10:00 PM
Thank you Joseph. I appreciate both your visits and support! All the best. // paul
Date: 5/19/2015 1:23:00 PM
Excellent write Paul........in every relationship communication takes a great impact, when communication is lost for words misunderstanding will rise.
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Date: 5/19/2015 3:56:00 PM
Hi Afolabi! I am pleased that we have crossed paths again! Thank you for stopping by. Yes, communication is most important. // paul
Date: 5/19/2015 8:19:00 AM
I do some of my best communicating this way but if she remains silent I am losing my touch! I enjoyed this piece Paul.
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Date: 5/19/2015 11:03:00 AM
Thank you Richard. I enjoyed your comment...and I'm smiling:) // paul
Date: 5/19/2015 4:44:00 AM
Paul, communication is very vital and this must be delivered well and good for it greatly affects one's life... :) Im sorry for being late on replying. rest assured that am better now than the past days... hugs and hugs. thanks for the prayers.. will pdate you~olive eloisa
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Date: 5/19/2015 11:06:00 AM
Olive_eloi....I am pleased to hear that you are much better...He listens...we just have to believe and wait...He delivers what is good for us. Hugs // paul
Date: 5/18/2015 9:10:00 AM
You have a gift with words that is simple yet so powerful, evoking feeling within the reading. Emile. #7
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Date: 5/18/2015 5:05:00 PM
Hi Emile! Your insightful comments are always appreciated. All the best. // paul
Date: 5/17/2015 11:59:00 PM
Actions do speak louder than words and are much more meaningful, I think... This poem was written and expressed beautifully, Paul. Good luck in Nette's contest!
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Date: 5/18/2015 5:04:00 PM
I agree with you, Kelly. Often words are not enough, but the message can be passed on in other ways. Thank you for a most welcome visit. hugs // paul
Date: 5/17/2015 10:01:00 PM
Excellent write. So much said in so few words. 7
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Date: 5/18/2015 4:15:00 PM
Thank you for reading and liking, Nandita! All the best. // paul
Date: 5/17/2015 5:27:00 PM
I guess you'll call it a silent testimony of their love...:-) Liked this one, Paul. Kim quite the corn today :-)
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Date: 5/18/2015 4:14:00 PM
Thank you Kim. // on a spring morn/ Kim was born/ in a field of corn....and the sun smiled in awe:) hugs // paul
Date: 5/17/2015 4:09:00 PM
this is really nice, Paul. Love that kind of communication.
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Date: 5/17/2015 4:44:00 PM
Thank you, Andrea! This poem started off with proper sign language, and finished this way. Glad you find no difficulty communicating:) // paul
Date: 5/17/2015 3:45:00 PM
EXCELLENT take on the theme - good luck in the contest:-) Hugs Jan xx 7 xx
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Jan Allison
Date: 5/17/2015 4:50:00 PM
ha ha ha pure fantasy my friend:-) Hugs Jan xx
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Jan Allison
Date: 5/17/2015 4:40:00 PM
ha ha ha: Cheeky! Hugs Jan xx
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Paul Callus
Date: 5/17/2015 4:40:00 PM
.....just wondering where you bought it from :)
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Paul Callus
Date: 5/17/2015 4:39:00 PM
Thank you, Jan Glad you like! Now, about that thong....:) / hugs / paul

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