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Commotion

Commotion Emotions cause commotion feelings deeper than the ocean i’m choking and hoping and praying and I’m just saying that I hope I can survive cause I really love life but I’ve got a knife stuck in my back, attack, attack I put it there myself & I can’t rip it out my throat is swollen, I can’t shout it’s hard to breathe, I can’t scream I can’t dream, I can’t do anything I’m paralyzed in the heart And I’m paralyzed in the mind Sometimes I just wish I could leave this all behind

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Date: 5/24/2010 11:57:00 AM
Awesome Write Destiny.....Larry
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Date: 5/5/2010 9:10:00 PM
powerful piece
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Date: 5/5/2010 7:33:00 PM
Nice expressions of thoughts
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Date: 5/5/2010 12:35:00 PM
Sounds like a confused, painful situation...There is light at the end of the tunnel just focus on that light....Very emotive and expressive write that you have penned in this one...Keep the creative pen flowing...Sara
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Date: 5/5/2010 12:24:00 PM
well done Destiny, enjoyed,..p.d
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