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Committed

here we were the both of us standing here in front of the altar getting ready to commit to one another can't turn back now it all just begun you said your vows and i said mine you put the ring on my finger and i knew from that moment we became one we promised to love each other to death do us part the love we had for each other before couldn't compare to the love we have now we are now connected in more ways than before our heart beats will become one,our minds body and soul

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Date: 10/13/2009 10:28:00 AM
Thank you for sharing your splendid poetry with us today Doresa. I enjoyed reading it. Love, Carol
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