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It dawns a day every year,
Taking kitchens busy,
Making corn flour roti,
Children wearing happy,serving,
House to house,neighbors,friends and family,
Hot,hot roti,
Cats chased out,come back in again and again,
My rotis serve to houses coming back to me,a common,
Like my comments on poems,bring back comments!
Copyright © Muhammad Safa Thajudeen | Year Posted 2014
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