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I write unto the blank papers stare A ball point pen in hand without a flare The words enscribed should be a future quote As I am the best or at least so you denote I listen to your comments out loud And damn you make me feel so proud I know that I am one of the best For you tell me so at least I can rest I take your words in heart with pride As I feel you only read what "I" enscribe But as I read words from others souls I see the same reply that you told I read the same things told to me You basterds are just lying to please You said I have so much to say I took it to heart as if it where a prayer I scroll upon others works of "art" You all say the same crap never heard a negative part So tell me I suck so I can have pride To be different than all these brown knosing flys "You have so much talent why dont you go pro" Tell that sh1t to the fool on the rope "As usual you stun me with your words of hope" I get tired of reading the same for all poets Giving each other hand jobs for praise If you didnt hate me now, I am sure your on your way Do I give a sh1t? Hell no I just laugh until it hurts At your pointless rantings of whos best on the blurbs I speak my mind and tell the truth Why dont you praise yourself and save time of the youth As they have more talent than you For they speak the "truth" and say "you suck" when its due

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