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They laughed at one another as they threw their mortar boards aloft, and dared to kiss the girl goodbye, though she had spurned them in the dry years underneath the towers, Now boys no more, and war much brighter than their lust for adolescent loveliness, the bus and train will take them to a new domain where pleasure girls will lie for them, compressed in six short weekends hence, until possessed with skill to kill, men pack their gear to fly across the globe and die in puzzlement, identified, and boxed and neatly laid to rest beneath a cool and restless shade. ~

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 8/2/2012 12:38:00 PM
"Uncle Sam wants you!" I shuddered at the sign all through junior high, this is, like, 1944. I worked at Lowry Field in Denver, delivering photos to the base photo studio from downtown. Half the photos were of G.I.s who went down in a friggin B-17, or 24 over Germany. What a God awful waste I thought, even at that tender age. I made it to commencement 1947. Thanks to the worst horror in history - the atomic bomb. daver
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Date: 8/1/2012 3:35:00 PM
exquisite writing, sweet man, and YES I understand it! I like your use of rhyme within the free verse, both internal and end rhyme (I love internal rhyme) :-) (don't forget to check soup mail!)
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Robert Ludden
Date: 8/1/2012 4:04:00 PM
Thank you. Yes, I employ intermal rhyme quite often even though many will not detect it. (I knew you would). I'm sure you noted the double entendre for "lie" as well. :-) -Dean

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