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Clouds of deep velvet drape the sea’s horizon Overcast, like my spirits without you Memories of our last farewell repeat It’s your gentle voice I missed most at first But now I ache for your touch and can hardly breathe ”Give me an answer when I return,” I said But your engaging smile told me, “Yes” And I can still see you standing on the dock Clasping the promise ring I gave to you as we said adieu Keep safe, my love, till I return Here in my heart, I cling to hope you still want me Only me in your life Make my dreams come true when this ship docks tomorrow Evermore is my foolish wanderlust quelled February 21, 2021 For John Hamilton’s “Coming Back Home” Acrostic contest

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Date: 3/9/2021 10:21:00 AM
Oh well done. I can feel the lonliness and anxiousness of her awaiting his return. Love it. God Bless, JB
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Date: 3/8/2021 4:08:00 PM
a seamless romantic acrostic, particularly like the imagery of the opening line - congrats on your no.1 win! :)
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Date: 3/8/2021 9:06:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. A beautiful story/write. Love your line, "Keep safe, my love, till I return." This had been said millions of times. Have a blessed day/week...........
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Date: 3/8/2021 8:22:00 AM
Carolyn, congratulations in John's contest with this excellent Acrostic poem, well done _Constance
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Date: 3/8/2021 4:35:00 AM
I like the analogy in the first lines, Beautiful write Carolyn, Congrats on your win..
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Date: 3/7/2021 4:00:00 PM
So that’s how you get a first place. Well done Carolyn. Terry
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Date: 3/7/2021 1:58:00 PM
BIG congrats my friend for winning at #1 with this beautiful poem.
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Date: 3/7/2021 12:45:00 PM
Hi Carolyn, I'm just coming to give you a big Congratulations on your 1st place win. It was well deserved. Have a great day:-) Alexis
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Date: 3/7/2021 10:51:00 AM
Another excellent offering Carolyn, enjoyed immensely, congrats on a shared top win!
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Carolyn Devonshire
Date: 3/8/2021 10:24:00 AM
Thank you, John. I enjoyed writing for your contest!
Date: 2/28/2021 12:41:00 PM
WoW! Carolyn, You’ve penned such a good entry for the contest theme. I could sense the longing and desire in each stanza. It looks like a winner to me. Best wishes in the contest. Have a wonderful day:-) Alexis
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Date: 2/23/2021 11:46:00 AM
this is awesome, hon x
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Date: 2/23/2021 9:34:00 AM
Hi Carolyn I simply love your heartfelt poems, this one is so loving, so engaging, so real, so beautiful, I love it - 'Here in my heart I cling to hope you still want me, only me in your life.'
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Carolyn Devonshire
Date: 2/23/2021 1:19:00 PM
Thanks so much for your lovely comment, Jennifer. You made my day!
Date: 2/23/2021 4:54:00 AM
Creative way to go for the contest. Reads like a good contender to me..Love affair? Thanks for dropping by. Sara
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Carolyn Devonshire
Date: 2/26/2021 9:22:00 AM
Just imagination, Sara. Thanks for reading!
Date: 2/22/2021 11:12:00 PM
Love seen on and off becomes tepid. If you love him stick to him. ~~
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Carolyn Devonshire
Date: 2/23/2021 1:21:00 PM
I wasn't writing about myself, Victor. Thanks for reading!
Date: 2/22/2021 10:49:00 AM
I am reminded of all those women who wasted their life waiting for the ship to come in! Good one for the contest! Aloha! Rico
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Carolyn Devonshire
Date: 2/23/2021 1:19:00 PM
I'm still waiting...
Date: 2/22/2021 8:28:00 AM
Carolyn, oh so romantic but with that lingering questions, does he return ? Wonderful acrostic _Constance
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Date: 2/22/2021 5:15:00 AM
Overcast skies in memories of farewell paint your canvas my friend--two hearts missing each other--awaiting reunion. Love is the pulse of heart as you so well illustrates, Carolyn. All the best.
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Date: 2/21/2021 4:58:00 PM
Splendid verse, Carolyn! A top winner for sure - Bob
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