Comfortable

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Comfortable as an old shoe One that has finally been put out of use Found a new function That is what I had become With you.. When I would read what you had to say The lines almost fit me to a tee The timing was so right My emotion you had captured I would get my thoughts together Visiting those familiar Reading, seeing those winners Check out contest Write a new work to impress Now !! Well now I don't even know if I will get one posted before I am logged off...

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M. Hussain Effendi

Date: 9/22/2011 4:47:00 AM

Hey Sara! I m gonna be frank, I did not really get the poem, it was probably too good and too beyond the level of understanding of an amateur poet like myself. Care to shed some light?

Wole Francis

Date: 9/22/2011 2:57:00 AM

nicely written Sara

Tony Lane

Date: 9/21/2011 2:19:00 PM

Don't try to be the fastest. Some wild eyed young poet will ride into town just lookin' to make his mark and even if you win, there's another right behind him. Tony