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Comes and Goes

in storm of silence beating wings left nest in spring will return heart asks? sighs yes dawn splendor in sky daffodils dancing in breeze is it your footstep? maybe Katuata-Haiku

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Rama Balasubramanian

Date: 7/20/2021 10:00:00 PM

Good one it is beautiful. You made the same mistake I did capital in title. Titles should be lowercase too. Thanks for brightening my Potd with your wonderful comments

Frances Schiavina
Date: 7/21/2021 8:24:00 AM

Since the poem is normally untitled, titles shouldn't count. Thank you! Your correction is greatly appreciate it.

Heidi Sands

Date: 7/16/2021 4:33:00 PM

Beautiful Haiku! I enjoyed :)