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Come With Me

Come with me, to the edge of my cliff, a small green precipice on the edge of the Earth, where I stood all alone letting the peace fill me to the brim close to the point of overflowing; Come with me, to my mountain where the silence screams at you where the view makes you forget to breathe and the immense vastness of the sky makes you feel microscopic; Come with me, to the filed at the base of my mountain where the wildflowers stretch and spin in the wind, where the grass whispers quietly to you; Come with me, to the place where God's glory is so apparent that all you can do is say thank you.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 6/5/2016 9:12:00 PM
GOOD TO SEE THIS ONE AGAIN....SKAT-
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Date: 7/11/2015 7:24:00 AM
So many great lines here I love this my favorit is " were the wildflowers strech and spin" congrats !
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Date: 7/11/2015 1:53:00 AM
Avery, Congrats on your Any Old Poem #8 win. Always ~LINDA~
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Date: 7/10/2015 6:41:00 PM
Great imagery here Avery....congrats on the win
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Date: 7/10/2015 1:15:00 AM
Avery Congratulations, on your awesome win. SKAT
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Date: 7/5/2015 11:39:00 PM
hi avery, this is a sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 7/5/2015 9:26:00 PM
Avery,, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry when you are ready :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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