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I took a trail that I had never taken before. A journey anticipating the unknown a sweet invitation to excite my senses. There was an aged forest of oak under their canopy of dark leaves, forming a secret sanctuary. Birds trilled from the trees trailing slashes of color across the landscape. A river of bright water was nearby shimmering in a stray sunbeam. It rushed heedlessly over crags pooling in fern-crowded shallows. This place is lush with living things perfumed by blossoms cloaked in misty rain. Soft buttercups nodded their dainty heads in the tall grasses. Come. Enchantment awaits my friend... Copyrightabc2014

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Date: 7/6/2016 2:02:00 PM
COME WALK WITH ME
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Date: 1/21/2014 12:45:00 AM
There is a good amount of toned imagery in your lines. For some odd reason, Peter Pan came to mind...very, very well done, Athena!
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Athena Beauchamp
Date: 1/21/2014 10:03:00 AM
THANK YOU FOR READING JUST A THOUGHT BROUGHT TO MIND. MY MOOD TENDS TO LEND A HAND. ATHENA

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